Fear | Critique 2 | Hadiya Robinson

I like what I've done but I feel like it's too much whitespace, should I add shading to the walls? I feel like there should be some color but I like it black and white, any suggestions? Also, is the text legible?

Fear crit 2 - Citlali Renteria

After I drew the white illustration it reminded me of Roy Lichtenstein's action word pieces, like this one...

so I went with his style.

Does it work?

Patricia Brooks - Monster Project

I plan to add the following:

• Fur/hair
• More angry features in face and skin folds around eyes
• Mouth
• Small water drops on web

**If the print is too dark I will have to adjust the color for more contrast. I plan on using glossy paper. What do you think?

Movie Poster Critique 2-Jacqueline Lin

Elizabeth- monster project

Game Poster Crit 1 | Nauseda

Still a lot to do obviously. The sun is a big theme in this game so I was going to play off that, with a sort of constructivist theme that I like so much. Will probably have a figure in the center of some sort.

Poster Crit 2