I think you did a great job on this piece. I would have maybe liked to see the text going across on top; it feels a bit right-heavy to me right now. I think your cup and sewing machine are fantastic and the choice of colors work really well with the sentence.
I like the placement of the objects together--they kind of seem to form the sentence on their own. I agree with Mia though, the sentence should be more centered!
I think you did a great job on this piece. I would have maybe liked to see the text going across on top; it feels a bit right-heavy to me right now. I think your cup and sewing machine are fantastic and the choice of colors work really well with the sentence.
ReplyDeleteThese objects are really well done. Each has some really great details and elements but all fit into their categories really nicely. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like the placement of the objects together--they kind of seem to form the sentence on their own. I agree with Mia though, the sentence should be more centered!
ReplyDeleteLooks really good and the background color works really good. I like your typography!
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