this is beautiful - it really came a long way. You used the advice from our last critique really well. changing the green background really works and the text looks a lot more cohesive.
I really like this piece. I love the change of your color background, it matches everything. I also like your type choice, everything comes together very well.
this is beautiful - it really came a long way. You used the advice from our last critique really well. changing the green background really works and the text looks a lot more cohesive.
ReplyDeleteI really like this piece. I love the change of your color background, it matches everything. I also like your type choice, everything comes together very well.
ReplyDeleteI think your color choices are a lot better in this one! good job
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