Monday, June 2, 2014

Sloane Smith: Crit Two




Here's what we're down to. I have version one, completely illustrated, either with or without the pills in the head, haven't decided yet. Or version two, with the vast oceanic nothingness background, the brush strokes seem really prominent now uploaded online. I will try to make them more transparent, and we'll see how it is printed out tomorrow. Let me know which one you like and any suggestions. Thanks!

2 comments:

  1. I like the first composition better but not so much the pills on the forehead maybe because I don't get the connection. However, I really like the colorful background you have going on.

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  2. I don't care for the "pills" in the head. I do like the simple line illustration. I think I like the second poster more.

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