Sunday, April 13, 2014

Beuerlein Critique 2

My last two objects: the simple pocket watch and the realistic teacup


4 comments:

  1. Beautiful, but remember that you need three different styles: realistic, simple and anthropomorphic...

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  2. I think this is great. I like that you decided to hand draw everything. I especially love the simple clock and the details of the text. I look forward to seeing all of the illustrations together on one composition.

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  3. I think these look even better than your rabbit! The attitude of your cup is perfect and I think all three will look great together!

    Is there any kind of editing you would be willing to do to your rabbit to make it match these ones even more? The cup is so heavy and the watch is so light that I think if the rabbit were somewhere in between, it would be just beyond excellent.

    Your flowers are even more amazing up close!

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  4. Nicole I think your stop watch is great! The lines are very clean and precise. Im not sure what is around the watch. Is it a frame or chain? If it is a frame maybe make the negative space within at the hole smaller. If it is a chain maybe move it away from the body of the watch. I like the hand writing on the face of the watch it add elegance. Great job!

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