Monday, April 7, 2014

Schipper Crit. 1

Here's the first of my three objects, the feather:

6 comments:

  1. Looks cool! Is this your simple/line drawing illustration? Did you experiment with making this the realistic illustration? I think there's a lot of really cool stuff you can do with a feather. Curious to see the next two!

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  2. What one does this fall under? Realistic? I love the edge of this. That must've taken a lot of time. It's really well done. Also, what are the other two objects you're making from the sentence?

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  3. I like all the different shadow details. I think this is really great, and I can't wait to see your other work!

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  4. This is cool! I love the way you decided to convey the different shades of the feather. Adds something interesting to the piece so it's not just a feather chilin' there. Looking good!

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  5. Great job with the feather! You created lots of motion that always makes something more interesting. You could add a few thin lines to give it more detail but overall it looks awesome!

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  6. If you're going for simple, you got it. If you're going for the realistic, just add a few more textures and you got it. I really like this piece. The contour really gives it a certain dynamic quality, like it's falling or something. It's great.

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