Tuesday, April 8, 2014

Critique 1-Jacqueline Lin

This is what I have for the flower bud, but I think it needs a lot of work. I plan on keeping the flower bud black and white, making the flower colorful, and the dead flower really detailed.

Flower bud- simple
Flower- anthropomorphism
Dead flower- realistic





2 comments:

  1. I really like your illustration. At first, I thought it was the flower, not the flower bud, but I think if you add color to the flower, in addition to thinking about the relation of size between the three flowers, it will work really well.

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  2. I really like this illustration. It is very simple, but I need to see everything I need to know from these simple line. The flower looks very elegant in this composition. Great Job!

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