Friday, April 11, 2014

Critique 2 - Patricia Brooks

Okay, everyone this is the LAST time I change my mind. My new sentence is...

Knowledge is the key that opens the doors of opportunities.

Knowledge- Book or just tree (simple)
Key- Key (anthropomorphic - happy to open the door)
Door- Wooden Door (realistic)



4 comments:

  1. Fantastic job! The door look incredibly realistic, however I think there's some inconsistency in the colors that could be fixed, especially around the bottom. Also, while I like the tree, think the bottom right branch looks a little wonky. Otherwise looks great!

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  2. I like the idea of just having the tree by itself. I think that it makes it more interesting and you could get rid of the book altogether. I do agree with Kellie, the bottom right branch looks a little off but otherwise I love it

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  3. You're three pieces look great, in terms of the look and color palette. You could consider adding an outline to the bowtie and hat of you're keys. Since both keys seem to use heavy strokes, these small details look a bit out of place. Also there seems to be another "color" for your door which forms a backwards "L" on the bottom right hand corner. You might want to adjust the coloring there.

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  4. I agree with Mia, the tree should be alone! I also love the anthropomorphic keys. They almost look realistic too... the mouth placement was genius!

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