Saturday, May 10, 2014

Critique 2 - Patricia Brooks

I don't know what to do with my background. What do you think?

 

 

 
I like this one ^

4 comments:

  1. I like the turquoise triangles one - I'd like to see what that type of patterned background looks like in pink? The upside down ones are really fun though too! Thats a very unique idea. I also like the one you said you like. What are you planning on doing with the mouth in that one? I would make a bigger smile, maybe with the mouth kind of hanging open/laughing compared to the regular nice smile you have in the images of you standing.

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  2. I like the upside down one. It is very unique and looks awesome great job!

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  3. I'd say the fourth one with the turquoise triangles is the best one (background), you can possibly put it behind the illustration of you upside down. It would give your piece some nice contrast with the coloring of your clothing and eyeshadow.

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  4. I really like the upside down ones. It creates so much tension and makes the right side up ones seem really static. You try to blend the highlights a little more like on her forehead so it doesn't pop out so much, but honestly, you portrait is really great.

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