Things I added:
- pocket to the shirt
- more detail in the shirt
- falling strings
- tried to fix the arms on "upside down pic"
- changed that eye stroke to a light pink
- matching background
- both documents are now the same size
- flipped collar on the "upside down pic"
- cleaned up my lines and more...
Yours turned out so well. I think the pocket really works to add some depth to the shirt. I also think the matching background works well to connect the two. My only critique would be that the strings that fall down on her face sort of look like they are stuck on- maybe adding a shadow would help so they look like they're not glued to her. But it's really wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThe shirt looks great. I was admittedly a little skeptical about adding the pocket, but everyone was right in that it adds some great and necessary detail to the shirt. And the ties falling over the face turned out really well. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI love the final product. It is so unique its unlike anything anyone else did! I like how you added detail in the shirt and in the upside down version, you fixed the strings. It looks so amazing!
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